Age/Gender: 26, Male
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I'm pitbulljones, i tend to make music, i drink, i smoke, i party. 24 years young now, beginning my career as a teacher, if you wanna know anything else by all means ask.
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alreet chron, you've brought back some nostalgia for me here haha. It's lovely mate, an almost spot on remake of the piece in question, i stress almost theres a couple of tiny, tiny errors. The first thing that struck me was how loud it was, i know in the game it's pretty loud in places, aiding the dramatisism, but your piece feels too close through out, no peaks or troughs, quiet to loud comparision, everything sounds like it is at the same level subjectively.
The other thing is the tempo, it feels a little bit fast in the opening, i don't know whether thats my memory playing tricks on me, just feels a couple of beats too fast. The choice of instrumentation is good tho, the strings/choir effect is bang on, eeriely bang on. Some of the plucks sound too harsh tho, they have the right sound but they should be played softer s you can really hear the pluck attack, tis a bit obtrusive.
Theres some artifacts im picking up throughout the song, don't know if it's clipping, it's mainly when the strings are in, sounds 'scratchy' dunno whether thats meant to be there. Piano is very nice, and the reverb fills the spaces nicely. I hope i don't sound too harsh on you here, i really do love the piece and it's fantastic all round, like i said they're only tiny things. To an ear untrained they wouldn't notice.
Overall then, it's a 9/10 and a 5. everything no matter how good can always be improved. It's nice to hear something new from you anyways. Oh and when you gonna do bubble bobble? I'm learning it on my guitar atm so may do it myself one day XD Keep it up and get making more stuff tis always a pleasure reviewing your music.
Pitters
btw there is a new tune of mine up, One Day It's Gonna Happen, give it a good old bashing if you want.
Author's Response:
hehehe ahh pitbulljones where to begin.. :P
the strings swell and take up a lot of the b/g.. and that "scratchiness" you hear - as so many others have commented on - is actually a result of the b/g ambiance merging with the strings - if you listen real closely you will hear rain and ppl walking around in the b/g - just as if you were actually in midgar yourself - street ambiance - stuff like that - I thought it added a bit to it :)
and I agree with you about the harp - its a bit too.. sharp - and as you the opening - it's your imagination - combined with the fact that there is a bit of legato on the strings so the pauses arent as wide.
as for your comments as you said the changes are mostly cosmetic and everyone can always improve - however I do feel that i have gotten to a pretty satisfactory point mastering wise so its just things here and there - most if not all that I am already aware of ^^
and I honestly can't remember which bubble bobble song you wanted me to do - I'll have to look it up.
I'll give your new song a review when you finish responding to all the reviews i gave you - if you havent already - I noticed yesterday there were some you still hadn't responded to :P
so ya thanks for the review pitbulljones!
-shawn-
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i forgot what the mac was for, tend not to do em. Tis a very nice loop, a tinkly, if a bit 'synthy' and it's a bit predictable but as a loop it wors fine, tis all a nice a sweet i've definately heard better from ya tho.
4/5
Author's Response:
Agreed! Cheers for the review ;)
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Nice tune sounds a bit like prodigy mixed with moloko, expecting someone to start singing 'heres my funky monkey'
Very very very good and dark though the beat is extremely bouncy with the rest of the track, which i wasn't expecting it works so well.
it's crazy, really is, but it really sounds amazing, production wise it's quality, faultless.
mate it's 10's across the board
5/5
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hello gorgeous, i thought i may come over whilst im about and give you some reviews.
Very good tune i must say mate, and you've certainly picked up some production techniques man. Solid meaty bass kicks, plenty of dark and shade, constant evolving of the tune maintains a lot of interest. though there are parts that i'd call 'generic' that piano section for example with the snare/clap it still maintains an air of originality.
Not one of my favourite tunes of yours but it's extremely good nontheless and certainly gets a 5.
pitters
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"Hmmm what do we have here?"
Gonna let this loop a few times before i really get going, but as it opened on first play i was instantly intrigued, some very ambient 'dark' sounds which i always like.
The glitchy beat is cool, scratchy with that bass drum on the off beats its very very cool.
It's very unnerving this track, reminds a bit of tricky but without vocals. Some nice reversed breathy sounds as well.
think a vocal would be good over this, or some abstract harmonising. It's quite a quiet track surprisingly, but that quietness contrast well with the delayed synth that comes in and out of the mix.
Can't emphasise the eerieness this track has, that slidy synth really tingles my synapses with freakish thoughts.
you very clearly have some disturbing thoughts going on in that head of yours, whatever they are they create some seriously fiendish tunes. loving this all the way.
production wise i think it's pretty bang on the button, can't fault it.
5/5
pitters
(new tune 'leave me be' when eve you have a mo)
Author's Response:
Thanks! Disturbing thoughts in this head of mine eh? It's odd that I would take that as such a high compliment isn't it?
I'm glad you liked it - I had a decent time making it.
Thanks again!
(also left a review for "Leave me be")
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would again suit a game, has that gamey feel about it, which is a good thing in a way, not overly dramatic or ear grabbing but musical enough to work in the menu or cut scene of a game. not overly brilliant and sounds a bit light but i like it if more for how simple it sounds than anything.
4/5
pitters
New tune up Leave Me Be (hear me manc tones singing)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review - I agree with all of the above - as I mentioned in a prior response, this was a last minute rework of a fairly generic loop that was created for a work project. The original wasn't great - it had to be "safe" nothing too extreme so you can't expect much from it. You gave a pretty fair assessment!
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Very much reminds me of menu music for 16bit games or early playstation stuff, nice, though the splashes sound weird compared to the rest of the tunes. Like all the blippity blops, and the main melody is good too. Yea like i said suit a VG very much or a flash game on here.
4.5/5 (5 if it werent for the splash)
Author's Response:
Ahhh yes - yeah this wasn't a serious track. It was a sort of a poke at Techno. All it needs is an super extended soft pad intro, a cheering crowd sample or two, a lilting female going "oooohhh-aaahhhhh yeaaahh" and maybe a siren and it'll be the next big club hit. :D
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haha, gotta say not my favourite sort of music, But as heavy rock goes it ticks the right boxes, i like the touches of gain distort which popped up earlier on.
Loud much? some nice fret wanking in places. It's hard fr me to really appraise this with no bias, ohhh i heard some background noise which would be due to hig gain but masking it would help.
it's good, just not my cup of tea
4/5
piters
Author's Response:
Yeah, no "bias" sry. :( The background noises are easy to explain. Guess active pick-ups aren't always better if you work directly at the comp. :/
Thanks for checking it out pitters! Atta boy! ;D
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Very nice guitar man, i like the delayed chorus effect, Just letting go over a couple of loops, The rhythm is a bit 'muddy' needs some clarity, the attack is thumping the strings too, It's a minor complaint. it opens as if it's leading into a rock tune. some really nice sounds being played and melodies too really nice. Think there is a couple of timings errors nothing horrendous though, but needs tightening up a touch.
The rhyhtm bit is my chief gripe here, can't quite put my finger on it. its very nice stuff though and if you develop it im sure it'd sound awesome, as it is it's about a 4.5/5 but as im nice i'll 5 ya.
pitters
Author's Response:
Hm...you really think so? Well, I guess I could agree on the little muddyness of the rhythm guitar but I disagree with the timing errors. ;D
It may sound a little strange near the end but it's all fine with the timing, don't worry.
Right with the rock tunish feeling. Normally it would burst out into something like that but I'm also a guy who likes the simplicity...just like you. ;D
Anyways, thanks for the cool review man! Good luck with your new job!
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Just listening through nice enough composition. Very much a tried and tested formula, the use of the strings haha, i gotta admit you add drama, but has been hammered to death. the picks nice, and the vocal is really clear.
The bass strings are too low, and once you get really dramatic, the strings drown everything out. they need taming back, or the singer needs to go much louder to compete with it.
It's a nice tune tho, the addition of drums would be nice one it picks up. the double track is done well, with a slight delay, adds a bit of clarity.
it has plenty of potential, but your a strings hamper it.
4/5.
Author's Response:
In that case, you should check out http://www.splicemusic.com/music/?sound=11371 - the original Nine Years Old song. With no strings! And yes, the mix could be fine-tuned a bit more...it was hard to find a balance. Feel free to make your own version! :-D And thanks for the review.
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