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Bro. I've reviewed you enough. your levelling is hurting your tracks. Softe. bit of eq.

Seriously. I can't keep doing this.

This is B E A U tiful.

a little less acid maybe, let that space and trip breath. it's not wrong just not me.

Moving into trap now. That is dark.

It's a 5.

Midnights-Ocean responds:

Thanks! I'm surprised you liked this. I still think this is a mess lol >.<; definitely need to clean it up and give more breathing space for stuff. I just layered too much here I think. Also the mix needs work XP

Inject your tone directly me in your veins. You are so funky, so acid, indie. i love it. Dude, just keep doing this and make money.

you know its a 5

now then.

That is some drowning reverb. It's well balanced considering. your melodic lines are lost a bit, just need to thin the ranges.

5

etK responds:

Thanks a lot for the criticism!! :D And I'm glad you like it overall !

oh my god.

There's some emotion.

Beautiful, well balanced, verb'd.

5

This is great, right in my ball park.

Overall it sounds a bit thin, the guitar has issues with the high level feedback. It hurts my ears a bit.

Ah, it's a layering issue, roll the multi band back a bit. This shouldn't be a loud track, thin it out and do some level cut.

I love this and I hope to hear more from you

5 as always

pbj

etK responds:

Thanks for the criticism!! I'm glad you liked it despite the issues you have with the mixing :D

Yes. great open. What synth exactly do you use for the drone, it sounds like the bee/wasp?

It's cool as fuck and I promise I will lay guitar down soon.

5

Syntrus responds:

Arturia Mini V

oh yeah.

I do love me some ambient atmosphere. Your open leans towards a muddy bottom end. I would suggest thinning out some low and highs to leave a good mid. It's causing the additional instrumentation to be less expressive due to unnecessary volume peaks. Judicious EQ, multi band compression and a wider stereo field would really benefit what is already a good track.

5 as always

pbj

Nice reverb on the drums. The snare doesn't sit though, try a pearl.

Yea this is cool, i hear the imitation guitar. Solid bass, signature acid.

It's a bit flat overall, a bit of multi comp and exciting, maybe a stereo enhancer too would do wonders.

Again I hear confidence in this track, you really are expressing yourself without doubting yourself. telling You to continue being you is the best advice I have ever given anyone.

5

pbj

We all do bro.

Great 2 step with the heavy verb.

This oozes confidence, machismo and bravado. It's dirty, grimey, yet uplifting, that 1:40 mark, with the additional layering, that there is where the gold is, you should mute the singular arp, let the other part have a few bars and transition into an orchestral section with a double time beat....hard cut, then repeat from 1:40 to a long fade.

I love this. Keep doing your thing. You have your signature tone.

5

pbj

Hi, I'm pitbulljones. Musician. Made from pure awesome. You can check my music out on here, soundcloud, youtube, last.fm, reverbnation and a how host of other websites. My music is free to be used in films and games, just credit me accordingly!

Age 40, Male

Audio/Visual Tech

University of Salford

Stockport, United Kingdom

Joined on 3/12/06

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