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yo nice tune yo got oin there, i'll ignoe the uva review, i'll take it as ur own work.
the gud points....
the instrumentation is nice, i like the style of the whole piece in general
all the levels are gud no blips are out of place sounds
the bad points (not so much bad, but a criticism)
all of this has been done in reason or fruity loops (or something similar)
it's not a bad thing thing but you lose the 'human' touch of playing music, things are too precise. it's been quatised to the point of extinction.
im a musician (lol a lot of us r) im offering my services to u to help with the guitar parts etc, i'll give u live parts for u to place in the track insteadof relying on elctro noises, u will never achiveve a 'live' sound uvawise.
this track has tonnes of potential, it really does. it just needs some emotion into it, a computer cant do that, no matter how much u try.
im not saying ur musically inept, ur cleary not, nut if u send me the riffs that are guiat i'll send u bk a proper guitar sample, honestly it'll feel a lot better, same with the basses and synths, get a live player, someone who can do it, and u get the huamn elemnat into it.
if u take this on board it's worth a five defo man, at the moment its a three, not bcos its shit, cos it aint, just bcos it's not 'live' if you know what i mean. if u get a couple of live samples u'll c a dramatic improvemant in ur song.
have a listen to my tunes, everythings live, i'm not sayin my stuff's better, hell no, that ain't for anyone to say, but u'll get an understanding of how a live performance sounds compared to an electronic performance, there's a feel to a live performance which is totally differnt to the exacting science which electronics and quantizeing brings.
anyways i liked the track, just if u want to revamp it get in touch i'll provide u with the guitar licks.