Seriously. I can't keep doing this.
This is B E A U tiful.
a little less acid maybe, let that space and trip breath. it's not wrong just not me.
Moving into trap now. That is dark.
It's a 5.
Seriously. I can't keep doing this.
This is B E A U tiful.
a little less acid maybe, let that space and trip breath. it's not wrong just not me.
Moving into trap now. That is dark.
It's a 5.
Thanks! I'm surprised you liked this. I still think this is a mess lol >.<; definitely need to clean it up and give more breathing space for stuff. I just layered too much here I think. Also the mix needs work XP
now then.
That is some drowning reverb. It's well balanced considering. your melodic lines are lost a bit, just need to thin the ranges.
5
Thanks a lot for the criticism!! :D And I'm glad you like it overall !
oh my god.
There's some emotion.
Beautiful, well balanced, verb'd.
5
This is great, right in my ball park.
Overall it sounds a bit thin, the guitar has issues with the high level feedback. It hurts my ears a bit.
Ah, it's a layering issue, roll the multi band back a bit. This shouldn't be a loud track, thin it out and do some level cut.
I love this and I hope to hear more from you
5 as always
pbj
Thanks for the criticism!! I'm glad you liked it despite the issues you have with the mixing :D
Yes. great open. What synth exactly do you use for the drone, it sounds like the bee/wasp?
It's cool as fuck and I promise I will lay guitar down soon.
5
Arturia Mini V
oh yeah.
I do love me some ambient atmosphere. Your open leans towards a muddy bottom end. I would suggest thinning out some low and highs to leave a good mid. It's causing the additional instrumentation to be less expressive due to unnecessary volume peaks. Judicious EQ, multi band compression and a wider stereo field would really benefit what is already a good track.
5 as always
pbj
haaaaaaaaa how 1990. Wow.
I mean this in a good way, 90's dance really hasn't aged well, but you KNOW a 90's dance tune as soon as you hear it. This could be on a Hacienda session easy.
It's well produced, the vocals are great. It's practically faultless. I personally didn't enjoy it but I certainly appreciated it.
5 all day.
pbj
Thanks brah. Yeah I really liked how the vocals turned out. Very catchy and thick. I know 90s is a very specific taste. I happen to like it, when I'm in the mood.
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