definitely not my bag. i'm just going to 5 and move on, sorry.
definitely not my bag. i'm just going to 5 and move on, sorry.
lol I'd be worried if you liked everything. XD Thanks!
you know i could say alot. I won't. i love your work.
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Yea, i'm in on this.
Joy Division. just clear your vocal, verb them snaps.
5
certainly interesting
playing on discordant notes.
yea, its not for many but I hear the aim.
A better kit, some more expressive synths you have something.
5
its an old song dude. i didnt have an idea about creating songs :/
Im all about dissonance. I really like this.
again your kit detracts.
This just needs proper post work, get them dynamics flowing
5
I'm trying to get better at all these mixing skills, it's tough!
Thanks for the review :D Glad you liked it anyway!
now that is a brave synth.
your low is a bit too low, muddy.
Koto yes! The string arrangements is lovely.
You have a beautiful evolving tune, it tells a story and you use amplitude effectively.
Just go in and do the post master, balance and enhance
5
Not my genre. So won't comment on structure.
Drums are too fruity. Get to work on tone choice.
5 always
Not sure what you mean by too fruity? But thanks for the positive score! :D
Kits too fruity son. Get a more natural kit and some verb on it.
For whatever reason, everything else is super low. Bring up everything, drop the kit. So many good tones, a really good tune is hidden behind a low mix. Tones are fine, it's just volume. Change the kit, bring the rest up. I personally love the vocal but the lack of clarity will frustrate others.
5
Again, not sure what you mean by fruity, but thanks for the constructive criticism! I'l definitely rework on the volume, but I feel like drums are easily hidden by the rest if I lower their volume :/
I'm glad you liked it anyway :)
Edit: I improved the mix and followed your advice!
hello c64!
not a big chiptune dude. I like it though. Can't offer much. it's chippy. Remove the modern touches, restrict to the chip.
5
Thanks. Believe it or not all the patches used on this are sampled from an atari (or so I'm told). Only other thing I did was add some stereo width I think.
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