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Amazing work :)

Beautiful soundscape. It sounds like something from Nightmare Before Christmas or Edward Scissorhands. Burton/Elfman esque and that is high praise.

The production is excellent with the mix wide, balanced and dynamic. It's something I have always struggled with creating natural movement in tracks. As much as I like the shortness of the track I feel you have scope to expand and develop this into a huge orchestrated piece.

5/5

Oscillator man oscillates.

Dank and dirty this my good fellow. FUCKING LOVE THEM DRUMS! If I'm right it's two full kits, a percussion and then a lot of break/glitch construction.

This feels like a K-hole in the worst place imaginable.

It's not 100% me, currently, young me certainly would love this.

Mix is spotless. Stereo is on point.

Maybe get back to the guitar and vocal stuff though ha.

5/5

pbj

ps

just upped a demo, would like your thoughts

Zen!

Always appreciate these more ambient, soft breaks tracks. Really into this. I think you done great in continually evolving the track given the short run time. You and I both can let tracks build up to 8 minute epics, but it's good practice to mix 3 minute wonders.

You're not on monitors and my ears are a little tired after mixing 4 tunes earlier but the mix sounds clean, balanced. Stereo balance is fine with all parts ranged well. The gated vocal stab is 'maybe' a bit too upfront and trebley, but it could just be my preference.

I would like to hear an extended mix in the future :)

Congratulations on front page, always deserved.

5/5

pbj

p.s

Funny thing. I have just posted a new work. I would appreciate your feedback.

Midnights-Ocean responds:

Hey so good to hear from you!

Heh, yeah. I love many genres but I feel the most mature and satisfied when I make something that just exudes zen. the world needs more peaceful music that gives you those good kinda tingles.

lol that vocal. Yesterday it sounded too loud to me. Now I think it's too soft. I don't know. Fook yeah an extended mix would be very cool. I'm stretched so thin creatively these days
though that I wouldn't hold your breath.

Cool beans. I'll go take a listen right now. <:3

Oh my! The prodigal son returns!

It's so good to see your name mate. I thought you long outgrew us.

Love this mate, that phasing is trippy as fuck. It's a relaxed, indie/ambient track, right where I want music. I think some guitar would be killer on this, i could try adding some. Thinking some dirty verb'd reverse chords and some licks here and there.

5 as is the way.

if you have time I would appreciate your thoughts on my shiz

I don't like the off kick. I find it distracting, takes me out of enjoying the track.

Vocal sample in the 1:40 is lovely, I'd go even more braver and drown it in reverb. Really love your percussive melody, classic pads and so on. Mix is in the lower mids and everything has separation. Again, not an overly wide mix, (are you mixing on cans?).

5 as always

Midnights-Ocean responds:

Yeah the time signature of this one is a little more unique. It's 2 time signatures playing at once. One has a downbeat that shifts back and forth every full cycle. It gives it a wide swinging feel. Very glad to hear the mix has good separation. It can be difficult with so much mid program. For me the first goal of mixing is spectral balance and separation. A muddy cluttered mix will sound shite no matter what. This was originally recorded direct to multi track tape, using less than modern instruments. So I guess it might not be very wide. I will check the image though next time I work on this. Thanks.

Big waveform ha!

Had to turn the monitors right down. All credit to getting a clean mix so fucking loud but christ on a bike, volume does not equal dynamics.

I'm a fan of dnb and this is a solid take, probably leaning jungle, but yea 160 bassy boom boom i love. Mix is balanced, nothing peaks. I'd love some vocal stabs here and there. I'd just suggest assessing the volume, look at some compression, make a mental note that people will be playing this on home set ups lol

5

LostChronology responds:

Hah, I'll keep it in mind for the future

oh this is zen as fuck. I love how even when you diversify you seem to allows come back to this sort of style. Those strings from 1:00. Maaaaaaan. There's echoes of Sigur Ros, Radiohead, Polyphonic Spree. But it's fundamentally your own tone.

The mix is solid, it's as defined as can be considering how much mid to upper mid there is, and that range is the hardest to balance. I feel you could widen the mix a bit. It could potentially help the upper mids. That is just personal preference mind.

Lovely piece of ambient. Right in my wheel house.

5

(btw, i have posted a new ditty,first in 3 months)

Midnights-Ocean responds:

Thanks! So good to find a review from you again. They are always super helpful. Yeah I should look into whether the 2 lead instruments are fighting for the center channel and maybe spread one more to the sides. I do a lot of genres but this type of stuff is my comfort zone. So glad you like. It's rough mixing mid heavy stuff indeed. I'll take a listen to your new track right now <:3

Nope.

Definitely not for me. Reminds me of happy hardcore ha. I'm sure there is an audience for this but I am not one of them. I actually think it's too fast, 180bpm would be more than enough. Your melodies aren't really defined either. Kicks solid, the female vox are nice, the general mix is correct for the genre. But it's like a musical manifestation of one of my migraines lol.

Onwards and upwards, congrats on FP.

pbj

Midnights-Ocean responds:

lol it's hard to define much at 200bpm. For the sake of my blood pressure I don't think I would make a habit out of this kind of thing.

Thanks all the same! : D

Front page again!

Not on monitors. But this is funky as fuck. It's got that late 90's early 00's funk hop groove. You bang a beastie boys rap or some sampled vocals baby we have a stew going.

I'm gonna put my monitors on one sec......

Right monitors on.

Bassier and less trebles. There's clipping in a beat 0:53-1:07, 2:23-2.37. It's off the retrigger on the bass kick. Not showing on normal speakers but immediately stood out on monitors.

The mix sounds treated to work on speakers rather than monitors, I don't know how you approach the mix down but there's an imbalance.

I love the track. It should be a 10. It's about a 7.5 due to the mix discrepancies.

I want vocals.

Great work as always though.

Midnights-Ocean responds:

Thanks bro! Always appreciate the feedback. I didn't think about funk but perhaps I should put this track in the funk portal. I had planed on doing some retro hiphop lyrics but haven't had the time yet. I totally agree this is asking for some vocals. Thanks for the time stamps. It's very useful for when I check back on this for another mixing session. The clipping issue might be a waveform not at zero point when it restarts. It's a common issue in logic that makes a clipping "click". It could also be an over saturation issue if it's on the kick. Regardless, I'll track it down next time I hit this tune. : )

Getting better and better. I really wish you would dm me to polish up though. Congratulations on front paging again, you deserve to be heard. Anything I have issue with has already been said, please get in touch

ConnorDeVaux responds:

Thanks man I know it, this is an old one I don't even have all the pieces to anymore though

Hi, I'm pitbulljones. Musician. Made from pure awesome. You can check my music out on here, soundcloud, youtube, last.fm, reverbnation and a how host of other websites. My music is free to be used in films and games, just credit me accordingly!

Age 40, Male

Audio/Visual Tech

University of Salford

Stockport, United Kingdom

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