Yes bro! This is some serious music. Your open had me, that is some moody, ambient trip hop. And it's all good. your mix is good, i think you need a less squelchy bass and your arp melody could 'maybe, this is just me' be more singular notes rather than having the repeat. That is it. I love it, it's dark, moody and could easily slot onto a film score especially considering how much 80's synth wave is in. I could imagine this in Terminator.
Five bro.
Pitbulljones