Well then, what do we have here?
An absolutely delicious tune. It's a heavy mix, but its not metal. The phrases are excellent, a lot of talent is in here. Your syncopated rhythm and drum is great.
Subtle glitch nice.
As a track, it is right in my ballpark. I think it needs some gentle work though.
The drums over power the whole mix, it sounds like you used a limiter on the track rather than a multi band compressor. It's the key thing you need to resolve. Multiband comp, soft knee -2db drop.
In turn your guitar on left, is so low in comparison to the rest of the track.
Run a high pass filter on the drums, low pass on the guitars. Pin drum and bass notes middle put the two guitars 33 left 33 right.
tiny bit of verb. Bright eq, multiband compress, excite, mastering plug.