I love your music. You have great lyrics and a unique vocal style. You just need to spend either money on some better gear, or time on your mastering. Doors always open bro.
5 always
I love your music. You have great lyrics and a unique vocal style. You just need to spend either money on some better gear, or time on your mastering. Doors always open bro.
5 always
beautiful. well orchestrated, well composed. I love this. I would change the drums that is it.
5
Well I give you the meat 121, what you have is really good/
5 pbj
oh my 80's heart.
yea im in this like a dog on heat.
some issues with the mix, you have competing leads which causes a cancel out. But yea, fuzzy squares and tris. love .
Your beat is brilliant, very much of it's er. Yeah, you nicked, mj's bad. but it's right. Your bass, simple, but exact and clean.
it's a great tune, you just need to address the cross talk in the two lead synths, just eq their ranges different.
5 always
pbj
eeeeesh.
I've got my monitors plugged in and running through my octacapture. I get flat response from them, incredibly accurate. Active too, so they go low and high. Stating that to clarify what is next.
Your track is too loud from the bat. Like it's limited to an inch of its life. Bass is there, but low and undefined. The beats, well muddied and low mid dominate. No snap. But that fucking donk is overly loud. Can't discern 75% of your instruments. Just middle noise all blending into a cacophony of nothing.
Please just strip it back, low levels first, run high pass on lows, low pass on highs. pan. you need to be using breakbeats for dnb, james brown gave us them.
I will never not 5. but this needs serious tlc.
5
pbj
You know it's a 5. I'm not going to badger you anymore. you are wonderful. you know where I am if you need me.
5
pbj
It ain't badgering, thanks a lot for the feedback and offers, I've been super busy with all kinds of stuff so I'm sorry I haven't been responding to ya but thanks mane, it means a lot
niiiiiiiice. I'm glad you cut the low on the ambient drone. Really lets the rest breathe. I love the off beat syncopation. I'm counting 140, but it's probably 70. But a 140 breaks beat could be very interesting. The balance is fine, some nice width and pan. Tones are good. I wish there was more, a beat, a harmony, an upbeat contrast to crash back into the wave.
You keep being awesome
5
pbj
Thanks! heh yeah I had to slap the low end way down on this one. I certainly could have gone farther with this one but it was supposed to be really simple. : )
yes.
grimy clear dnb, breaks
very much mixed for the genre.
love it
5
pbj
Thanks man! :)
- Astro
Hi, I'm pitbulljones. Musician. Made from pure awesome. You can check my music out on here, soundcloud, youtube, last.fm, reverbnation and a how host of other websites. My music is free to be used in films and games, just credit me accordingly!
Age 41, Male
Audio/Visual Tech
University of Salford
Stockport, United Kingdom
Joined on 3/12/06