pitbulljones's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Lightwave Cruising]

Well dynamics mean shit.

not your fault and aint shitting on you.

Perfectly adequate.

never not 5

5

Tremulos responds:

No that is my fault, I don't like to spend time on mixing and mastering so I slap a mutliband compressor on the master and call it good. It's laziness tbh. I'm happy you enjoyed it anyways, thanks for the review!

[Anything is Possible]

And here we go again. dynamics

Where's the head room. I give up.

It's fine, a nice track.

But god damn, dynamics ?

i never not 5

5

[Kevil the Japanese Devil - End Credits]

5

brilliant.

Been complaining of lack of dynamism.

Not an issue with you.

Beautiful

5

[Bandit]

it's cool. very 80's v wave. it's stupendously loud though. I never not 5, but christ you need a dynamics lesson.

5 pbj

[A Shopkeeper's Journey]

I never not 5.

this is arse.

[Gunbob Theme]

yea

[Living Dystopia]

Ok. You need to be banging vox out now. Listen to Ian Brown.

I'll give it a go. got lyrics aplenty, but i would request you remove the phased panning synth, if a vocal were to be added, then bring it into an instrumental mid 8.

5

dad

Syntrus responds:

Does the synth you want gone for your cut come in around 00:26? The Korg Ms20 lead? Would you like the file so we can do a collab? Who is Ian Brown? Do you need it extended? I know nothing of song structure I make fun beeps on my computer. LOL

[Mystic Break]

peaky peaky peaky

[Coming Back]

nice. (rhino strings?)

you struggle in a similar aspect to me. Step layering. I would suggest you try this without metronome, or a significantly slower one. Just to humanize it a tad. Longer release, slower attack will give it a more natural feel between notes.

Composition wise it's a lovely tear jerker, it swells well and hits peak precisely where it should. The strings are strong but your support lacks expression in comparison, they are lost in the mix. So width would help massively.

You recording orchestral, mix orchestral. Think about panning, placement and verb.

5 btw always

pbj

[Astro-Reality - 8bit -- Ruins of Time]

hmmmmmmmmm.

you using c64?

No offense here. I hate chiptune, more specifically new makers.

Yea. nice melody, but you are not keeping to 4 outs, adding a delay and verb too. Not shitting on you. Just trying to advise how a chip works. 4 channels. you want an effect you lose a channel

5 regardless

pbj

Astro-reality responds:

Thanks for the advice! I am not really into the chiptune genre but I wanted to try something out with these 8bit plugins which I found. Will keep this in mind for the next time.