pitbulljones's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[I Was Me The Whole Time (leveled)]

oh yes

That sine pad tickled me.

Triangles and sawtooths in the arps :)

Now this is a wide mix. Your drums potentially could benefit from wide panning, i used to do it all the time, essentially mix the kit like you see it, so wide crashes and rides, off centre snares and hats. it's a preference and takes effort perfecting it.

Love it mate, incredibly zen and mixed well.

Midnights-Ocean responds:

Hey thanks! I'm glad you liked this one. It's one of those tracks I didn't expect anyone but me to dig lol. Indeed! Never underestimate the beauty of simple waveforms <:3. I set up the automation to slowly modulate back and forth between wavefroms/harmonics and was very pleased with the result. I agree about the kit and hats. Now that you mention it, it would suit this track well. I will try to remember to tackle that next time I do a mixing pass on this one. : )

[Catgirls]

Absolutely not for me.

But it'll well mixed (on monitors). Fair bit of dissonance in your parts, which seems deliberate. It's difficult for me to rate this. I don't actually like it. That huge kick is too big, the overall soundscape a bit narrow. I hate being harsh, but I have heard better compositions and better mixing from you. It's always a good thing to experiment, it's better than a lot, but not as good as the top end. Sorry for being a wet blanket :(

Midnights-Ocean responds:

Mate if you loved every single thing I released, I'd be worried about you lol.

Never refrain from criticism. Even if it's harsh, it's incredibly helpful and I'm not offended one bit.

Thanks though for not downing my stats with less than a 5. It's very much appreciated. : )

[some feeling]

FOD! Front page! Well done :)

Father-of-Death responds:

THANK YOU!!! YOU LEGEND

[Trumpet Voluntary]

Congrats on FP. It's always nice to see an old name still posting :)

It's a beautifully performed piece, very much in line with the original composition. Though my personal preference is for a softer organ, per expression it's fundamentally correct. Your trumpet is the standout part, it sounds as good as any orchestra performance.

It's overall well arranged with no errors. My only complaint being a personal preference prefering more width and some natural reverb to make it sound like a hall performance instead of a room.

sorohanro responds:

Thank you for the very insightful review. I may edit it later and try to fix that.
The organ is the Kontakt default one, might put a tape simulator on it to make it softer.

[The Papier-Mâché Man (Instrumental)]

congrats on frontpage.

I can copy and paste any review i have done for you lol.

Your mixes ARE getting better, it does seem you do listen to me occasionally. What you're problem here is is a bit of width, a lower levelled mix and some soft compression.

My doors always open. hit me up.

[Destiny Of Hearts (leveled)]

haaaaaaaaaaaaa.

This is old. I can hear it in the mix. Was this in propellerhead rebirth? or reason.

The vox stand out. If you have stems, grab them, make anew. oh that synth guitar is cheese lmao.

definitely too bassy. but i hear your intent. this activity sounds far more sequence based compared to your modern output. it's interesting to hear and witness your progression

Midnights-Ocean responds:

Mid 2000s if memory serves. I had both reason and rebirth running on an old trash computer tower from the 90s lol. My production has changed a lot since then. thanks for the 5 all the same. : )

[The Fractal Method (leveled)]

I'm on monitors by a stroke of luck.

It's clean. Your kick is bassy as. I hear all your arps, your 808s, acid stabs and the whole acid house vibe. All them lows kick, in a club it works. On stereo, on monitors....its all in the low mid. Nothing in the mid high or high. All that low energy could potentially kill some speakers where peeps try and bring highs out.

It's a great track, the composition is great, it's clean and well comp'd. I don't necessarily know exactly what to make high, maybe some octaved arpeggios? idk.

it's about a 7 now with potential for a 10

Midnights-Ocean responds:

Thanks for the feedback! I always appreciate it. Not sure what I could add to fill out the uppers more without there being too many elements, which I'm notorious for doing lol.

[Be With Us]

Front fucking page!

Who'd you buy off lol.

Nah, this is banging. Acid house as fuck. Remember 90's Wipeout? It's there!

Mix is clean as a whistle, i'm impressed as shit with the key ranging, the blends are superb. Breakbeat transition yes man, back to the glitch.

Ok. It's monitors and headphones time........

Dude it's a 10. All across the board. Basses bang, drums bang, all the elements meld to an exciting piece of old skool acid.

This is ready phenomenal, You deserve every plaudit you get on this. You have elevated yourself to a new level. I couldn't do this.

10.

perfect

Midnights-Ocean responds:

WOW WOW! THANKS!

Oh yeah I remember the 90s >X3. A grand golden decade for electronic innovation, which I miss dearly. I always wanted to keep that kind of music alive. I’m very pleased and honored to get another front page. It’s thanks to people like you and David from mixbus TV that I have made as much progress in my production as I have. Finding the formula that allows my creativity to do it’s thing, while still sticking to the bread and butter that people enjoy. I do listen to all the critique, good and bad, even if it doesn’t always seem like it. It’s hard to see one’s own slow progress sometimes. Bless you for pointing it out to me.

Thank you so much for the encouragement. All of it! ^_^ Maybe if life lets me, I could release a really banging album some time, heh.

Cheers mate. : )

[Still Life]

My nipples are rock hard.

That is bleeding the dynamic range. My man! I hear these tiny highs........i'm expecting them. 2:20......thy are almost.

Imagine some huge back verb'd guitar just oscillating. A glacial pound on a tom, drowned in verb. Then a lone bass. This needs growth.

Could i grab this to experiment with ?

[God of the Future (feat. Anonymous singer vocals)]

oh my! Christ on a bike!

Bit of a banger here haven't we? Congratulations on frontpage! There's a whole load of great here but there's a fair bit of fundamentals lacking. I'm going through monitors and headphones just to make sure right now........

That clip on open? Clean it up, you're better than that.

Your vocals are over processed, I love them, I hear the little gates, pans and verb repeats. But it's all upper, where's the mid warmth. Go for cleaner vox, use the fx sparingly.

Your bass and kick are perfect. There's a lot of high bleed on the hats just washing your mix. Cut that.

There's a rotory pad to the right....just washing with delay, love it, but bring it up, cut it's low so it can be pushed. (the vox and hats blocking it's range)

The acid arps work well. Your development works, I see and hear someone who has looked at the composition and really applied themselves in maintaining progression.

It's 85% there. The tune is brilliant. If you go back to this and mix again with consideration of the range it would be exceptional.